Motat trip
Motat was usual enough;
It had a tram, olden days school, machines, gift shop
and a trampoline I never been on.
and a trampoline I never been on.
My friends, my parent helper and I did what kids do
- ate morning tea, looked at machines, walked in
an olden day house, posed behind the
colourful Motat sign, and sat in the tram.
- ate morning tea, looked at machines, walked in
an olden day house, posed behind the
colourful Motat sign, and sat in the tram.
Doing everything important.
By Ekamjot kohli
Ekamjot's writing was inspired James K Baxter in his
model of The town was usual enough... We had fun using
his model to create our own Motat poem.
model of The town was usual enough... We had fun using
his model to create our own Motat poem.
No comments:
Post a Comment
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about